Showing posts with label the writing process. Show all posts
Showing posts with label the writing process. Show all posts

Tuesday, November 30, 2010

I didn't hit 50K, but doing NaNo still made me a winner

I'm enjoying seeing the NaNo Winner badges on friends' websites, even as their default pics on Facebook, and am proud of them for their success. This is my fourth year that I participated. I didn't hit the 50,000 word mark, but thanks to the NaNoWriMo campaign, I still feel like a winner.

Here's why...

NaNo helped me focus

I don't lack for ideas to write about. I struggle with focus. Thank goodness I only have a talent for writing fiction, not like some of my friends who also are poets, or I'd be more scattered than I am. Before NaNo 2010, I had four other books started, each stalling out around 25,000 words. However, each of those books is viable and worthy of completion. After NaNo, I added 6,000 words to one novel and more significantly, nearly 20,000 words to another. Participating in NaNo definitely helped me focus. The focus began from external sources--the badges, the word meters, the buzz among writers on the Internet--until I became sufficiently dug in and was able to internalize my focus. This constituted a breakthrough because I had essentially given up on this book because of some harsh critics early on. NaNo gave me the wherewithal to pick it up and give it another go.

NaNo helped me write smarter this time

Because of all the helpful blog posts about how to prepare for NaNo, my time was more productive than ever. Before I sat down to write the 20K on RACE CARD, I did a beat sheet, laying out every plot point from beginning to end. I also reexamined my structure, to make sure I had the major plot points and the moment when "all hope is lost" in the right places. Once I had that beat sheet, all I had to do was carve out time to write. On each project, the books moved forward more prudently than they had in the past. I won't have to do a lot of rewriting as a result. Did the beat sheet change midwriting? Sure, it always does. Writing, not outlining, is my way of thinking. But overall the product was much stronger as a result.

NaNo strengthened my resolve

Thanks to NaNo, I became reinvested in each book, convinced of their worth, and became recommitted to finishing each one. Prior to NaNo, I was feeling not only conflicted but a little too lackadaisical. Sure, I guess I would eventually finish the books someday. Now, I know I'll finish each, and I won't have to spend a lot of time doing heavy rewrites because they are stronger works this time around.

I may not be a category NaNo winner. I can't post an official winner badge like many of my deserving friends. But make no mistake, this November I feel as though I've brought home the mirror ball trophy! Thanks to my Wilkes cohort for the constant encouragement and to so many fellow writers for the great tips and cosmic energy around writing. All very good things for this fiction writer.

Thursday, October 14, 2010

Prompted to say more about . . . prompts!

Writers (and teachers of writing) seem to be polarized about using writing prompts. One good writing buddy stated categorically that he hated prompts and wouldn't participate in any endeavor that expected him to use them. Several other writing teachers said they never use them. Why this is, well, I'm uncertain.

Is it mentally "cheating" to rely on an outside stimulus to trigger your intrinsic creative genius? Are some writers fearful that following a prompt won't allow them to tap the organic story they're holding inside them, that's itching to be told?

Paint chips can inspire more than remodeling ventures
Prompts can be single words like fragrant, crimson, circus, three words I remember using in my first competitive flash fiction writing experience--all evocative, all working well for me. In fact, the story I wrote for crimson ended up being published here, a fine online compendium that, sadly, is no longer around.

Yes, prompts can be story starters several lines long or lines from other's writing, loosely followed. They can be images, photos, and objects. One of my faculty members at Wilkes University used paint chips, specifically the names given to different colors of paint to create a collection of poems--paint chip poems, if you will, based on names like Corn Husk Green, Grass Cloth, and Jungle Trail. A strikingly original, kitschy kind of prompt, that prompted some beautiful work.

I would say prompts may border on expedient, but are not cheating the "organic" writing process. I heartily argue in favor of giving prompts a try.

We are bombarded by so many stimuli day in and day out that our senses and sensibilities can become dulled. Sound, color, smells, tastes. My day is chock full of them. Does that mean I give each sensation its due? Absolutely not. Instead, it's almost like I've been desensitized to the concrete world and have to invent ways to re-engage--to see the world like a child, like Dorothea Brande recommends in her book Becoming a Writer. Prompts force me to focus on one idea, one sensation, one word. Maybe I have adult ADHD that has never been diagnosed. That's highly possible. But I don't think I'm the only writer who responds well to prompts. Another Wilkes faculty member remarked in a panel discussion that a single real-life image can and has prompted him to write whole books.

Lenore Hart Poyer
Writer Lenore Hart was my fiction foundations teacher in the Wilkes University Creative Writing Program. Her newest book The Raven's Bride is due in bookstores in February 2011. Lenore had this to say about using prompts:

I use writing prompts in workshops or writing classes for various reasons. They are great to get past the blank terror of a plain white page, because the hardest part is always just GETTING STARTED. I use them also in a targeted way to help people with specific craft issues (not understanding POV, or a need to stop using too much summary, or adding specific details to counteract vagueness).

For my Beginning and Advanced Undergraduate Fiction Workshops I made up different three-page-scene writing exercises for each student, in lieu of a final exam. It was specifically crafted to force that particular person to address his or her biggest weakness, or to just do something different than the usual safe default story line. After I passed these out, they all invariably gasped and whined and cried and no doubt cursed me up their sleeves, but then many came to my office later to say, "It's the best thing I ever wrote." So those for me have been the best uses for prompts. I don't tend to use them myself, I already have too many stories clamoring in my head to be told, and I'll never get to them all in this life! But I think a prompt can be very useful if you ever do feel stuck and need a good old-fashioned kick in the pants.

So, there certainly are applications for those teaching creative writing at the college level. What about in real-life practice?

Recently, I participated in a nine-round short fiction contest sponsored by The Write Idea. This year they added picture prompts, which I used more than I used the linguistic prompts. In fact, I won one of the rounds for which I used a picture prompt--a painting in Monet's Japanese series.

Suffice it to say, what inspires us to write is as varied as the kinds of stories we write. Some of us have different ways of connecting with our muse. The most important thing is use what works in order to keep yourself creating new content with as much regularity as your schedule permits.

Tuesday, October 5, 2010

Writing improves thinking

Yesterday, a friend told me she felt especially sad. On the same day she'd sent her late mother's things to auction, her son wrote a poignant blog post about leaving the United States for the mission field in India, forwarding what he'd written.

The post was moving, encapsulating both the excitement of embarking on a journey to a foreign country and a healthy fear of the unknown as well as a sadness at leaving the only life he's known. Here's an excerpt:
Our tickets are bought. November 18. That's the day we uproot our little family, board a plane, and skip across the globe to plant ourselves in South Asia. The date stares at me from the calendar on my desk.

I had breakfast with my brother Joe the other day. I'd always thought moving overseas would be one big, dramatic airport-hugs-and-kisses goodbye. But it's really a thousand goodbyes that creep into everyday moments like bagels and coffee with a brother and make them heavy with solemnity.
My friend's son and his wife have been blogging for years now about raising children and following their call. As a result, he writes clearly. He's able to take what's in his head and heart and put it on paper with clarity, with precision, with style.

No process is better for clarifying thinking than writing. It forces you to confront what you think and feel about things. If you can't express your thoughts in your writing, then you haven't spent enough time alone with them, distilling them. If you want to move people with your thinking, then practice extracting it from your head and putting it into words.

In my experience, if you want to think better, write. Then write better. Plying each skill improves the other, in turn.